Not too shabby, Mike! You have the whole thing down, now you just have to nail it. Your smaller triplet runs later in the solo were spot on, but the long one had some timing issues.
I am working on this one now as well, and have about half of it down ok. At first, I did not think I would be able to play the triplet runs with pick and pluck, but I am starting to like it more, and am getting the hang of it.
I hope to post my effort soon. Anyway, great job, Mike! I would like to hear it with the backing track higher in the mix. I could not hear it much at all.