Hey Alan, nicely done getting the solo memorized and recorded.
You hit the strings cleanly with no unwanted backround sounds.
Don't be discouraged with the amount of time it took to practice this solo, it is supposed to be fun ! And it took most of us that long or longer too.
If you listen more closely to the backing track as you are playing/recording, then it will sound less deliberate. You can continue practicing this one, but you seem ready to start learning solo 3.