Mike. I like it a lot! You play well and put in plenty of nice (and different) riffs! From one aspiring soloist to a pro (you play gigs and get paid!! yay!). Anyway. There are a few riff beginnings but more riff endings that it sounded like you put less into it.
( much of that was semi spontaineous, so I prebably knw what I wanted to start with but kind of ran out of ideas as the licks finished. I'll give that more thought) More ownership? Perhaps that 1/4 step Blues bend with staccato to finish a riff?
(That's good advice! I've been taking some lessons from a local SRV tribute artist and the little 1/4 step bends and vibrattos are always beautiful) Also during these random seconds you could focus a little more on note count. Some you could hold longer, some you could end quicker. Griff gave me a good speed development exercise which I have taken to all of the boxes (I've a long way to go)
( If @Griff wouldn't mind, I'd love to see the speed exercise.. that's one of my big bugaboos. I don't feel like my speed is improving) I like your playing here. I notice a lot of improvement from the last time I listened to one of your recordings which was probably last Fall sometime.
(Thanks Maybe I need to go back to some of those older recordings so I can see the improvement too)