Give Me Strength (an original)

[CaptainMoto]

that was cool, a little departure from your usual

Thanks Mark,
I never know where my songs will take me.
Thanks for giving it a listen.

 

[CaptainMoto]

Made a few changes, here's the final:
https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/captainmoto/give-me-strength

 

[Many Moons]

Like the reverb. The vocal seems to be standing out a bit more, what did you do? (apart from the reverb)

 

[CaptainMoto]

Like the reverb. The vocal seems to be standing out a bit more, what did you do? (apart from the reverb)

Well,.
Cut out some of the repetitive MMM MMM MMMs and added a little lyrical bridge.
Did a redo one of the verses.
To add some variety and interest in the mix ,I added some verb & delay on a few of the vocal parts, .
Cut out some of the driving guitar in a few places and brought up the bass.
Then I dialed back the guitar volume when the lyrics come in.
I think It could be better but, like usual, I'm tired of mess'n with this one, time for something different next.

 

[Many Moons]

A few changes??????

 

[CaptainMoto]

A few changes??????

Ha,
I should have redone the entire thing............too lazy