Good job Tim, you have it all there and you were a little smoother on the second half, in fact it sounded like you were ready to up the tempo and wanted to go for itÂ
I think you were actually going a tad too fast there Tim, its easy to do with a bass rhythm like this.Good practice for this is to play it (either fast or slow) & finger the notes as they change but don't pick - just follow the changes in time with the recording.It will help big time.
LP