Blues Thing in Gm

[JPsuff]

I was poking around some stuff I recorded and found this.
I did it a little over a month ago and I thought I'd post it here to see what you think about it.

It's probably not my very best effort, but I like it.

https://dl.dropbox.com/s/71elkf16yq9h6lk/jp112.mp3?dl=0

 

[Dr. Ron]

Nice playing JP. Your tone was spot on for the backing track. Very evocative at times. Phrasing
generally really good. If any criticism at all, it would be a little more spacing or at least change up
the run on 1/8 notes. But, that's a small point. I really enjoyed it.

 

[HotLks]

Sounds great JP! Very smooth. I'd be happy to play like that. You show nice creativity.

I'm sorry that it ended.

See you down the road!

 

[MikeS]

Very nice JP.

 

[JPsuff]

Thanks guys!

Ron, I agree about the eighth-notes, I have a tendency to lean on them too much.
I'm working on speed -- that is to say not flat-out speed but "quick speed" to replace those repetitive notes with little flurries now and then.

Baby steps...

 

[Thatman]

Good one JP I like the way you use the full length of the neck to keep 5mins interesting throughout. Well done.

 

[artyman]

Some nice playing, but as already said, some changes in phrasing and longer notes required (I'm also guilty )

 

[CaptainMoto]

I like the airy feeling.
Yes a tad more breathing room in a few places might make it better.
Gm? Sounds like Bm to me.

 

[Ted_Zeppelin]

Very nice JP. That was a great song to just sit back, listen and go along for the journey! Loved it.

 

[Many Moons]

Dreamy and creamy. Very nice. I suppose I would go along with the minor pointers, but lets face it, the vast majority of us students on this forum do exactly the same.