Down

[BronwynH]

Hi Gang
I wrote this song a while back and since I see so many people trying lyrics out here I thought I'd put one of my more finished attempts up.
So here goes. :-?

Down By Bronwyn Hellings
Bm
When you leave could you close the door
A                                          Bm
I’ve no expectations of people any more
Bm
There’s just me here sighing, lying on the floor
A7                                         Bm
My state of mind is lost, I just don’t care anymore

Bm                 D
A blind man
G                   Em
In a cold, cold world
Bm                      D
When a blind man cries
G                        Bm
It will melt your heart    

There once was hope in a distant room
But it all fell down much too soon
Hope was dashed there in that cold unrelenting doom
Searching for reasons in the gloom    

Still  blind
In a cold, cold world
When a blind man cries
It’s from his soul


Yes I know it's really down. I just had to get something out of my system at the time.
ciao
BronwynH

 

[wgabree]

Re: ang

Nice - sometimes sad things need to be said.  And the key of Bm seems to fit the tone well.

 

[Alexander Blue]

Re: ang

         Hey B,

             "Blind man in a cold, cold world" ... been there a couple times ... great lyrics.

                                  [smiley=thumbsup.gif]

 

[BronwynH]

Re: ang

Hi Guys
I'm not sure where the "ang" in the thread came from on this one, as I must have forgotten to put something in, but I'm taking it as short for anguish.
Anyway thank you for the encouragement. As I said I have never listed a song I have written anywhere before and it is good to get a bit of positive feedback even more so because it's a really sad song.
Ciao
Bronwyn

 

[SunnyOne]

Re: ang

looks good, even if he is blind!