Jack - fixit submission for 11/19

Elwood

Blues
really nice Jack! I don't know what improvement you are after? You kept time, mixed things up between phrases, sounded pretty, yup. :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup:
 

Jack

Blues Junior
Thanks so much Elwood! For improvement, well when the main melody starts, the second note was supposed to be a double-stop, not a thud, the second time I go up to the 8th fret I think there's a wrong note in there, the trill at the end could have been better, stuff like that :) I put a "maximizer" effect on it which kind of destroyed the subtleties of the quiet vs. loud parts, but that's just a matter of turning it off lol.
 

Paleo

Student Of The Blues
when the main melody starts, the second note was supposed to be a double-stop, not a thud, the second time I go up to the 8th fret I think there's a wrong note in there, the trill at the end could have been better, stuff like that
That's called "Nit-Picking".
Good Job!
 
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