You going to have Hank Marvin listening to your stuff Arty! That was a real nice section you took your time playing through, very ethereal! The shadow knows! (or The Shadows know)
I do not know what is supposed to be wrong with that Chris! Nice tone! good chops!
I do know what you can do to improve next time, start earlier and play longer!
There ya go Chris. Very nice finish to the track sir. Not a thing wrong with that.
Now that you and Mike have plunged in, it would be great to hear more from you. Keep a recording of this effort, and compare it to your latest in 6 months time. You might be pleasantly surprised. Well done guys.